jan Peni en jan Upi

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Hello there! This is my first time attempting to write something in Toki Pona. I didn’t quite manage to get everything across, but I hope I did a decent job. Either way, it’s a fun exercise that will help me get better at the language.
Maybe I’ll expand later on some of the things I sort of left out.

ala suli laso li sewi e jan Peni. ona li monsuta li suli suli. jan ala li lon ni ma. jan Peni li wile e mama ona. ona li e ma seme?

jan li monsi e jan Peni li toki: “toki a! mi jan Upi. nimi sina li seme?”

jan Peni li ala toki. oko ona li suli.

jan Upi toki: “mi pakala. mi toki kalama mute.”

“ala. sina pona. mi wile jan pona. mi jan Peni.” jan a! ona li jan.

“mi olin e nimi ona. sina kama ala kama jan pona mi?”

jan Peni li sewi e pini uta li toki: “lon.”

ona li tawa li kalama ala taso jan Peni toki: “mi lon e ma seme?”

jan Upi li sama sona ala. “ma ni li Pikan. sina jan sona anu seme?”

jan Peni li tawa e lawa ona. “mi…mi sona ala.”

jan Upi li lukin e monsuta lon e sinpin ona li toki: “sina pona. sina ala jan sona taso sina jan pona mi.”

ona li kama wan. jan Peni li toki kalama lili: “jan Upi o sina jan pona mi nanpa wan.”

ona li tawa e tomo sona. jan Peni li monsuta ala e pona tan jan Upi li jan pona sin ona.

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As I said before, I have barely any experience in Toki Pona. I’m sure most of my sentences are grammatically incorrect (I’m 90% sure I left out an e or two) or just plain old unclear, so concrit is heavily encouraged.