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Description: exactly what it says on the tin. a fan translation of my immortal, but with (hopefully) correct toki pona grammar and spelling.
Tags: fan fiction
Sources: archiveofourown.org
Archives: archive.ph
Notes: mi nasin Markdown e lipu open pi nasin HTML toki Inli li lon lipu ni
My Immortal in toki pona
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wow! this is…a lot. thank you to ma pona for the help and encouragement. i hope i can get some more chapters out at some point but…no promises.
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a handy dandy guide to the characters and such:
- jan Eponi: enoby
- jan Teko: drako
- jan moli Pota: vampire potter
- jan Losi Meli: b’loody mary
- jan Wilo: willow
- jan Lepen: raven
- kulupu pi olin seli mi: my chemical romance
- tomo esun Otopi: hot topic
- jan pi pilin pimeja: goffs
- jan pi nasin ike: prepz
sitelen lili mama: meli pona mi (jaki a! nasin ni ala) li pona mute, tan ona li pali lili e sitelen musi ni. o sina pona a! o jan Juten, sina jan olin pi kon ike mi. o sina pona kin a! kulupu pi olin seli mi li pona.
toki. mi jan Eponi Tane Temensa Lepen We li jo e linja pimeja suli (nimi mi li lon tan ni) e linja lili pi loje laso e pini linja loje e lukin kule pi telo lete. jan mute li toki e mi sama jan Emi Li (sitelen lili mama: sina sona ala e ona la, o weka a!). mi lon ala kulupu sama pi jan Sela We, taso mi wile e ni, tan ona li unpa mute. mi jan moli, taso kiwen uta mi li nasa ala. selo mi li walo. mi jan wawa li jan pi tomo sona pi nena soweli. tenpo sike ni li pini tawa mi. sina sona ala la, mi jan pi pilin pimeja li len e pimeja mute. mi olin e tomo esun Otopi li esun e len ale lon tomo esun ni. tenpo ni la, mi len e len sewi pimeja e len lili pimeja noka e len loje walo pi noka e poki noka pimeja. sinpin mi la, mi jo e ko pimeja uta e ko walo sinpin e ko pimeja pi lukin selo e ko loje pi sewi lukin. mi insa ala tomo sona. mi pilin pona tan sewi li pali e telo e telo lete e suno ala. jan pi nasin ike li lukin e mi. mi luka ike e ona.
jan li toki e -jan Eponi o!- ona li jan Teko Malo a!
-seme li lon?-
toki la, jan Teko li suwi. -ala.-
taso tenpo ni la, mi kute e jan pona mi li wile weka a!
sitelen lili mama: ni li pona ala pona? o toki tawa mi.
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feedback is greatly appreciated. i’m sure i made a ton of mistakes and i’d love corrections (and if you’re interested in helping write more, please say so, i’d love help).